Not bad. The door shot you already heard about, and you were a bit unsteady with the camera. If you are going to continue with this, they make a hand held steadycam mount that would smooth out the motion. Intro music would help, but keep it simple, or it will become irratatimg every time you hear it. Exit music. You gave no details either as what was the draw,(why THIS place) number of acreas, costs, permits, I want to hunt pigs , but I would need details to tell me if I can do it with the time and money available. What is provided, and what is not. Welcome to editing! Been there, done that, for radio 20 years ago.Good luck!
The only real difference between a good tracker and a bad tracker is observation. All the same data is present for both. The rest is understanding what you are seeing.